Richard was feeling a mix of excitement and nervousness as he drove down the familiar road to visit his daughter, Deidre, for his 80th birthday. The rhythmic tapping of his fingers on the steering wheel was the only sound in the car. Ever since his beloved wife had passed away four years ago, Deidre hadn’t visited for Thanksgiving. Nowadays, they connected with a phone call once a week.
As the house came into view, Richard saw Deidre appear at the doorway. He stepped out, spreading his arms wide open. “Surprise!” he shouted cheerfully.
She looked shocked and tears immediately filled her eyes. “Daddy? What are you doing here?” she asked, her voice cracking with emotion.
He chuckled softly. “I came to celebrate my eightieth with you,” he said with a twinkle in his eye. But his joy quickly faded when he saw the tears streaming down her face. “What’s troubling you, sweetie? Why the tears?” he asked concernedly.
“Nothing, Dad. Everything’s fine,” Deidre hurriedly said as she wiped her eyes and forced a small smile. “I just wasn’t expecting anyone. I have work to do, and now’s not really a good time,” she explained hesitantly. “I’ll call you later, and we can catch up over dinner, okay? I’m really sorry, Dad.”
Still baffled and hurting inside by her abrupt dismissal, Richard watched as Deidre gently closed the door, leaving him on the porch. Something wasn’t right. He began to suspect that his daughter was in some sort of trouble.
With very few options, Richard decided to take a closer look through the windows. He saw Deidre seated in the living room, flanked by two intimidating men.
“Who was that?” demanded one of the men gruffly.
“Oh, just a neighborhood kid playing pranks,” Deidre lied, her voice trembling slightly.
“Let’s get back to business,” the second man said impatiently. “You’re six months overdue on your loan, Deidre. Mr. Marco isn’t a patient man.”
“I just need a little more time,” she pleaded desperately. “I’m sure my business will pick up during the winter months.”
“Time is something you don’t have,” the first man replied menacingly, his hand resting on a gun nestled in his waistband. “Those who owe Mr. Marco often end up becoming fish food…” he hinted darkly, waving the pistol threateningly.
Relief washed over Richard as the man tucked the gun away and began to search the room for valuable items.
“I need those!” Deidre protested as they started to confiscate her things. “I can’t keep my business afloat without them.”
The man just sneered. “Boo-hoo,” he mocked. “Stop whining or I might not be so generous.”
Deidre was left collapsed on the floor, sobbing, as the men ransacked her house.
Completely dumbfounded, Richard couldn’t understand why Deidre hadn’t confided in him about her dire situation. She had always assured him that her business was thriving, yet clearly, her troubles were far from over. Determined to help, Richard knew he had to act swiftly.
He stealthily followed the men as they loaded several appliances from Deidre’s house into their vehicle and departed.
They eventually pulled up in front of a shady-looking two-story building downtown, which Richard suspected was a bar. Though closed, the door was unlocked, and Richard was able to sneak in undetected.
He watched as the two men joined several others seated at a large table. One of the men approached him sternly.
“We’re closed,” he growled, showing no patience. “Get out of here.”
Ignoring the warning, Richard spoke up. “I’m here to talk about Deidre’s debt.”
Across the table, a man—gentlemanly in appearance but for a noticeable scar—rose to inspect Richard more closely. “Oh?” he questioned, piqued. “You must be Mr. Marco.”
“How much does she owe you?” Richard asked nervously.
Mr. Marco chuckled dismissively. “Good Samaritan, are you? Deidre owes $80,000 from a business loan she couldn’t repay as planned.”
“I have about $20,000 in savings,” said Richard, shocked by the sum she owed.
“That doesn’t even scratch the surface,” Mr. Marco sighed. “However, there might be another way you can help.”
Though he didn’t like the sound of this, Richard felt he had no choice for his daughter’s sake.
“What do you want me to do?” he asked, his voice steady but anxious.
Mr. Marco grinned and motioned him over. “We’re having a little trouble getting some cars across the border into Canada due to paperwork delays. But some naive Grandpa like you might have better luck.”
Left with no other choice, Richard agreed. Later that night, while paused at a gas station near the border, he was startled by a barking police dog.
Panicking, Richard jumped back into his car as the police began pursuing him, sirens blazing.
He cursed under his breath, navigating the car wildly through the traffic until he spotted a dirt road leading into the woods. He veered off-road, attempting to escape.
Soon, the car was stuck teetering on a slope above a river. The wheels spun hopelessly as the car slid slowly toward the water.
“No!” Richard shouted as the car plummeted, crashing into the river with a splash and flooding with water quickly.
Overcome with urgency, Richard forced the door open and sought his way to the surface.
Safely reaching the riverbank, dripping but relieved, Richard realized he needed to resolve the $80,000 debt urgently. He made his way to the bank to mortgage his home.
“I need to mortgage my house,” he explained to the bank clerk, eager to get the funds quickly into his account.
As he waited for the paperwork, his phone rang—it was Deidre.
“Dad! Some rough-looking men came around asking about you. What’s going on?”
“Tell them I’ll be there soon,” Richard responded. “I’ve arranged things out for your debt. I just wish you’d confided in me, Deidre.”
Completing the mortgage papers, Richard drove his rental car back to the downtown club.
Just as he was about to enter, Deidre arrived, looking determined. “I won’t let you deal with this alone,” she said. “I may not know how you found out about this mess, but the least I can do is fight by your side.”
Realizing he couldn’t dissuade her, Richard entered the club with Deidre at his side. He laid a duffel bag on the table, filled with cash from the mortgage.
“This is the $80,000 Deidre owes you,” he announced firmly, “Plus $15,000 for the car that ended up in the river.”
Mr. Marco’s face twisted in anger. “Fifteen grand won’t cover the shipment you lost,” he bellowed.
Suddenly, sirens wailed outside, and the room filled with chaos.
Father and daughter huddled beneath the tables as police quickly overran the club, capturing Mr. Marco.
After the police escorted them out safely, Richard sighed in relief. He had escaped danger, and more importantly, his daughter was safe.
In the comfort of an ambulance, Deidre looked tearful and grateful. “I dragged you into this mess,” she admitted, ashamed. “I didn’t know how to tell you I failed.”
“You’re not a failure,” Richard said, hugging her close. “Maybe it didn’t work out this time, but you tried. Please, let’s be open with each other more often from now.”
Reassured by her father’s love and support, Deidre knew everything would eventually be okay.